Messages like this below from Säde, 16, in Estonia are one of the very best things about what I do.

Hi!
I think I read your book when I was around 12 or 13, but I still remember it as one of the first books, that I couldn’t put down before I had finished it. The reason why I’m writing you now is that I didn’t thank you for writing such an amazing book and I think The Black Tattoo got me into sci-fi and fantasy novels and is the reason I can hardly read any other genres now.
I’ve wanted to write a book for a very long time. I’ve always had dozens of ideas circling around and evolving in my head, but I just don’t know where to start. So I wanted to ask how can you do it? How can you write something you love, without leaving anything out that is appealing to you, but isn’t actually really important to the story? Thanks again for your work.

Here’s my reply.

Hi Säde,

It’s a thrill and an honour to read your kind words about The Black Tattoo. There’s no need to thank me – I had a lot of fun writing that book – instead it is I who should be thanking you: Thank You! 😀

Your question is one to which I’m still working out the answer myself – and I look forward to continuing to attempt to figure it out for the rest of my writing life. I’ve learned some stuff I think, but if I’ve any chance of telling you anything useful here on this Guestbook I’ll have to be selective. Hope that’s ok. ;D

First answer: /you/ should be selective too. Don’t try to put /all/ your ideas into one story. Pick your very best ideas – the ones you’re most excited and passionate about – and focus on those. Make a list if you like: that’s how I started The Black Tattoo. I listed all the things I could think of that I – at the moment I sat down to make the list – would most love to find in a story. In that case the list began ‘swordfights, demonic possession, flying kung fu’ and continued from there, as you know. ;D Next I started asking myself how I could put the elements together in a way that was the most exciting I could possibly think of at the time. Then, later, once I thought I’d worked that out as best I could, I started working out how to write it.

Starting from a list of what made me excited worked very well for me as a way to begin. It meant that whenever things got tough with the book (as is inevitable in any project) I had my excitement about what I was writing to keep me going. I needed it.

Two other shorter points about what you’ve said, if I may. I’m a little puzzled by what you said about leaving things out. I think that learning when to leave things out is one of the core skills in writing. What gets left out is often what makes a piece of writing great. I suggest that the more you read, watching and learning from other writers’ technique, the more you might see why. And this is my second point: I think you should read as widely as you possibly can – not ‘just’ your chosen genre (though of course it is one of the richest and most inspiring!) but others too. The wider you read, the richer a stew of ideas you’ll be able to simmer, stir and serve up in your writing (sorry for that metaphor, it’s almost dinner time as I’m typing this and I’m hungry ;D) If you’re interested in book recommendations, I’ve got a list of things that I think are terrific at my LibraryThing profile, here.

Thank you so much, again, for your wonderful message, Säde. I’m delighted and honoured that my work has inspired you, and very grateful that you took the time to write and tell me so.

Best wishes from London,

Sam

 

Back at Trapped By Monsters this week, a meaty dose of Golden Age SF.

Let me introduce you to one of the stars of my current book. Not the owl; the guitar.

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It’s a Fender Jaguar. This one’s new. Part of the reason I got it was to celebrate the fact that I’m now as sure as I can be that two guitars like it are definitely going to be in the book – together with all the other main elements that were in the book’s first working draft.

The second draft is due in mid-September. There’s plenty of work to be done, but that work is of a clarifying, refining nature – not the major surgery I was worried about. That’s a big deal for me. As my somewhat inarticulate post when I finished it implied, I was excited about the first working draft. The book had survived its darkest hour and was now starting to look like the book I want it to be. What I didn’t know was whether anyone else would want to read it.

I now have fantastic, inspiring comments and notes from the book’s first test readers: HUGE thanks here to Laura, Jack, Adrian and James. I now also have the notes and comments – and the backing and enthusiasm – of my editor, the redoubtable Ruth of Random House Children’s Books UK.

Before our meeting at the start of this month the last time Ruth and I spoke about the book was in Autumn 2011, in a pub in London’s West End. At the end of a long, arm-waving speech from me about bands, space travel, utopias, cowboys and giant squid Ruth nodded and said, ‘Sounds like you’re enjoying yourself. Show me when it’s done.’ For nearly two years afterwards those words were the only clue I had as to whether the book I wanted to write might be something Ruth wants to publish.

It is. And it’s going to have Fender Jaguars in, and everything. I am happy.

Back to work. 😀

Sam

Interested in some reading recommendations? I’ve just updated my LibraryThing Review Page with most of a year’s worth from Trapped By Monsters. All the books listed there you can read for free (or for a nominal ordering fee) at your local library – if/while you’ve still got one.

Lately, while gathering up what needs to be done to my current book, I’ve been engaged in one of my favourite bits of the whole writing process – researching things that might be relevant to my next.

Areas I read up on for my current book included cochlear implants, radical politics and marine biology. I found that the less I knew about each subject to begin with, the more satisfying it was to research it.

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As anyone who knows what I look like will confirm, the subject I’m researching now is one about which I know nothing whatsoever. 😀

A thunderous THANK YOU to the staff and students of The Market Bosworth School for the warm welcome they gave me yesterday. As often happens at my school events, I was asked to name my favourite book. I have lots. Here’s one:

At Trapped By Monsters this week, my final Great Escape is Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind by Hayao Miyazaki.

We still have his books. I took yesterday off to reread one of my favourites, Look to Windward. While enjoying it just as much and maybe more the second time, I was reminded very powerfully of the influence his writing has had on mine; his attitude too.

Around when I first read Look to Windward I saw an interview with Banks in which he said something to the effect that you’re not a Serious Writer until you’ve had at least a hundred rejections. Acutely unpublished as I was then, I began adding up mine, from the first short stories I submitted to magazines, competitions, publishers and agents through the first novels that came and went later. Before I got my first ‘yes’ – for my fourth novel, The Black Tattoo – I received one hundred and thirty-four messages saying ‘no’.

Sometimes sensible young people at my school events ask me why I didn’t just stop and give up. I tell them that all my rejections hurt of course but as their total got closer to triple figures, I got excited. At one hundred rejections I had a party, to celebrate becoming a Serious Writer. I tell young people about Iain Banks, how wonderful his books are, and how it’s thanks in part to his example that now I get the chance to do so.

He told us it was coming. It was still too soon.

Sam

Penultimate TBM Great Escape: Black Feathers by Joseph D’Lacey.

Sometimes I have to print out a book to prove to myself that, at last, it exists.

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It does. Another person (her name starts with L) has read it now, and everything. HEE HEE HEE HEE.

Latest TBM Great Escape: The Metabarons by Alejandro Jodorowsky and Juan Gimenez.

Also: if this week’s Pacific Rim trailer has whetted your appetite for some giant monster destruction, there’s a certain book of mine that you might enjoy too if you haven’t read it yet. ;D

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